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I Knew I loved you

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*A young man walks into a dance club wearing a short sleeve navy blue shirt and Black slacks. He walks up to the bar counter and calls to the bar tender* "Hey, can I get a rum 'n coke?"

*the bar tender walks over to the young man and replies with a smile as he gets a glass* "Sure thing pal." *The Bar tender walks over to the small bar frig and gets the coke then grabs the bottle of rum off the shelf behind the bar counter and pores both in the glass and sets it in front of the young man* "Here ya go sir, 2 35" *the bar tender held out his hand*

*the young man reaches into his pocket and pulled out a 5, he hands it to the bar tender as he picks up his drink* "Keep the change." *he sips his rum 'n coke and then puts it back down, looking into it as he thought of his day. His day had been pretty bad. He was falsely arrested, kick out of a car parts store for looking like he was going to steal, mistaken for a hobo, and almost fired form his job at his father's restaurant. He looked up at the mirror over the back of the bar to look at himself, when out of the corner of his view on the mirror he saw a girl looking a crossed the bar at him. He looked towards her to see what she would do*

*the young girl had long brown hair and was wearing a beautiful Black silk dress. She smiled slightly as she looked to her own drink and sipped on the strew in it as she glanced back over towards the young man, still smiling*

*He looked down at his drink for a moment then looked back towards her, still facing forward to face his drink on the bar corner*

*She seemed to giggles slightly and looked away quickly, but the noise of the bar and music was to loud to hear her*

*The young man smiled a bit, looking completely into his drink as if trying not to think of the girl a cross form him*

*The young girl looks back towards the young man, her smile softened as she looked back to her drink and started to steer her strew in it*

*The young man soon finds he can't stop thinking of the girl a crossed form him. He slowly looked up and over towards her with a soft smile to see her looking into her drink*

*She didn't notice that he was looking at her, her smile slowly fades as she signed and bought her elbow up to rest on the bar corner and then rested her head on her hand, tilting her head on to it and continued to steer her strew around her drink*

*The young man looks back to his drink, thinking of a way to talk to the girl*

*The DJ starts to play a slow and soft beat* "ok people, its time to play something for those, couples out there in the club" *the song that began to play was 'I Knew I Loved You by Savage Garden' and people started to walk onto the dance floor and dance together*

*the young man started to smile again, he looked towards the girl*

*She was still leaning on her hand and steering her strew around her drink*

*the young man notice that him and her where the only two at the bar counter now. He signed* "well, this is my chance" *he drink the same more of his rum 'n coke and stood up, he slow walked over to her and held his hand to her*

*she noticed his hand and looked at it, then looked up at him* "what?"

"Come on" *the young man smile and tipped his head toward the dance floor as the song started to play again*

*he smile and shoke her head* "why would you want to dance with me? We don't even know each other so what’s the point. Or do you think your going somewhere with this?" *she looked as him as if she thought he was a pervert*

*he shoke his head* "No, I'm not like that, really. I was just thinking I could get to know you... But if that’s the way you feel, I'll just go then. You’ll know where I am if you change your mind" *He turned around t walk away*

*She reached up and grabbed his wrist gently* "wait... I would like to dance... will you dance with me, I didn't mean to sound so mean" *he smiled at him softly*

*he looked back at her, and turned his hand to grab her wrist gently and pulled her up as he stared to walk onto the dance floor* "then lets go" *He pulled her gently to the dance floor and stopped and turned to her with a soft smile*

*The DJ changed the song, he changed it to 'At The Beginning With You by Donna Lexis and Richard Marx' and set to for the next song*

*The young girl looked up at the young man* "lets dance" *She let go of his wrist and put her arms gentle around the back of his neck*

*he gentle wrapped his arms around her low back, gently pulling her close to him. he smiled as se began to slowly move slightly side to side as she starts to lead in the dance*

*She followed his motion, her beautiful Brown eyes gazing up into the young mans Blue-hazel eyes as they slowly danced in a circle*

*He smiled as he looked into her eyes* "I'm Heero, what’s your name?" *He chuckled slightly*

*he giggled slightly* "Nice to meet you Heero, I'm Kei" *She seemed very happy to be dancing with him*

*The DJ started to play 'Hero by Enrique Iglesias' and people started to dance like Heero and Kei*

*Kei smiled as she rested her head on Heero's Chest*

*Heero's eyes softened as he leaned his head down onto hers, smiling with her as they danced*

*Soon, they other looked at each other again, Heero with his Blue-hazel eyes and Kei with her beautiful brown eyes. Then, they leaned into one another. They met their lips in a passionate kiss, one that seemed to last forever as the night passed by*

*The DJ started to get the next song ready as the 'Hero' was ending* "this is the last song for this evening, hope those couples out there enjoy it" *he swung around and then hit the play switch. The next song started to play, it was 'Listen To Your Heart by DHT' and some people started to leave*

*Heero gently broke the kiss, opening his eyes to look at Kei's*

*Kei softly opened her eyes to look into Heero's. She jerked into a hug around his torso* "Thank you, Heero" *She started to Cry slightly, but only tears of happiness*

*Heero was slightly shocked but still wrapped his arms around her, gently* "Thank you for what?" *he looked down at her*

*Kei looked up at him, smiling in tears*

*Heero looked at her worried* "what’s wrong?" *he gently wiped away her tears*

*Kei sniffled slightly* "I'm... I'm just happy is all, thank you for being so nice to me. No one has ever made me feel so happy before, Thank you"

*She hug Heero tighter, resting her hand on his chest again*

*Heero smiled softly* "oh Kei...it was an honor to be with you. It’s made me glad to know I could make some one happy" *He hugged her closer and rested his head on hers*

*They continued to dance as more and more people leave the Club, the DJ started to shutdown his equipment, the bar tender closed the bar counter, the club's food services started to shutdown, and the other people in the club started to leave. The Music had stopped, but both Kei and Heero continued to dance to the sound of their own feelings*
The Picture is not mine.

THis is a short Stroy I've been writing for some time, based on a dream i had about my special some one. I hopw you all enjpy the read and look for 'I knew I loved you- Part2'
© 2007 - 2024 Alucard-Dracula01
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PriestessOfSuzaku's avatar
awww...thats soooo cute ^^ love ur writing...